Tuesday, January 19

55 - I Danced...


The moon rose up high
And showered its silver sparkle
It danced in joy with the stars
The air felt misty and light
We danced happily on the terrace…

Beer in my left hand and she on right
We tangoed to bliss with a kiss

Next, it was a free fall from terrace…
RIP- to her…

30 comments:

Sangfroid said...

Damn! That was unanticipated.

Well plotted.

commited to life said...

hehhehehee

ok i knw that is so insensitive on my part
but still
its was truely
LOLZ!

Pooja said...

OMG..u never cease 2 amaze me!

gud work!

Vinz said...

@sangfroid,

thank u...
keep visiting..

vinz...

Vinz said...

@committed..

yeah, even i was a bit cruel i guess..!!

:)

vinz..

Vinz said...

@pooja,

thank u pooja...
gud, u liked it..!!

:)

vinz

Smita said...

lol!!! That's my honest reaction :D

If the girl had to contribute to it then it shud end as ...

RIP- to her…and I take him with me

Shefs said...

hehe.....i dont believe u published it....haha..........i like the twist frankly

ANWESA said...

roman-gic !

P.S.:roman-gic=romantic+tragic

Vinod R Iyer said...

Such a saddistic b********* you are :)

But ya .. she deserves it I guess ;)

avdi said...

Mean mean mean .... hehe !

Cinderella said...

Holy hell!
Not fair...!! x-(

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

That is sad. I wish it is filmy.

Hemanth Potluri said...

tragic with beautiful words...it can only be vinu :)..nice bro :)..

urs..hemu..

moi said...

what was that, sarcastic end huh?

vimmuuu said...

ROFFFTL -- thats, Roll on the floor falling from the terrace laughing !!! :D :D :D

she fell accidently or did they think of suiciding ? or did he push her ???

Vinz said...

@smita,

lol..!!

vinz

Vinz said...

@shefs..

:)

Vinz said...

@anwesa

thats a new term coined..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@vinod,

ya, i know..hehe/....

:)

Vinz said...

@avdi,

is it..!!
dont think so..!!

;)

Vinz said...

@Cinderella,

i know..
but still...

:)

Vinz said...

@hobo,

:)
yeah totally..!!

Vinz said...

@hemanth,

thnx bro..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@moi,

i dont know..just came like that ...

:)

Vinz said...

@vimmu,

the investigation is on..!!!

:)

Adisha said...

Nooooo ???!!! Really ?? Shoot... Too bad !! :)) Nicely one ...

The Ketchup Girl said...

oh my gawwwd, whatte cruel thing you can be. (:

Vinz said...

@adisha.,

yeah i know..
thanx for reading..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@ketchup girl,

yeah, at times..my thoughts can get cruel....

:)