The moon rose up high
And showered its silver sparkle
It danced in joy with the stars
The air felt misty and light
We danced happily on the terrace…
Beer in my left hand and she on right
We tangoed to bliss with a kiss
Next, it was a free fall from terrace…
RIP- to her…
30 comments:
Damn! That was unanticipated.
Well plotted.
hehhehehee
ok i knw that is so insensitive on my part
but still
its was truely
LOLZ!
OMG..u never cease 2 amaze me!
gud work!
@sangfroid,
thank u...
keep visiting..
vinz...
@committed..
yeah, even i was a bit cruel i guess..!!
:)
vinz..
@pooja,
thank u pooja...
gud, u liked it..!!
:)
vinz
lol!!! That's my honest reaction :D
If the girl had to contribute to it then it shud end as ...
RIP- to her…and I take him with me
hehe.....i dont believe u published it....haha..........i like the twist frankly
roman-gic !
P.S.:roman-gic=romantic+tragic
Such a saddistic b********* you are :)
But ya .. she deserves it I guess ;)
Mean mean mean .... hehe !
Holy hell!
Not fair...!! x-(
That is sad. I wish it is filmy.
tragic with beautiful words...it can only be vinu :)..nice bro :)..
urs..hemu..
what was that, sarcastic end huh?
ROFFFTL -- thats, Roll on the floor falling from the terrace laughing !!! :D :D :D
she fell accidently or did they think of suiciding ? or did he push her ???
@smita,
lol..!!
vinz
@shefs..
:)
@anwesa
thats a new term coined..!!
:)
@vinod,
ya, i know..hehe/....
:)
@avdi,
is it..!!
dont think so..!!
;)
@Cinderella,
i know..
but still...
:)
@hobo,
:)
yeah totally..!!
@hemanth,
thnx bro..!!
:)
@moi,
i dont know..just came like that ...
:)
@vimmu,
the investigation is on..!!!
:)
Nooooo ???!!! Really ?? Shoot... Too bad !! :)) Nicely one ...
oh my gawwwd, whatte cruel thing you can be. (:
@adisha.,
yeah i know..
thanx for reading..!!
:)
@ketchup girl,
yeah, at times..my thoughts can get cruel....
:)
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