The moment the flight landed he couldn’t wait for the door to open. He had already unfastened his seat belt and impatiently waited on the aisle. The beautiful air hostesses were waiting for the door to open. The red skirted girls were looking beautiful if not ‘HOT’, he thought. While he waited there impatiently the door opened and he rushed towards it. Stepping down the stairs he sensed the smell of his motherland.
While waiting for the luggage he threw his eyes towards the gate. After a round of gaze, much to his delight he found his sweetheart, his better-half waiting over there, outside the glass walls. When their eyes met each other he could feel an upheaval of joy beaming out from his body.
He got into the Mercedes that was waiting outside for them. The driver helped him load his luggage back into the dickey. “What happened to the new BMW? He asked. “Your sister had gone to meet her friend in that, sir” the driver said politely. Settling on the back seat with his lady, he felt very relaxed. Holding her hands, sitting very close to her he dabbed his lips on her smooth cheeks. The touch itself had made her cheeks turn rosy.
In front of the huge iron gates they waited. As the security guard opened the gate, the Merc moved in. Along side the garden the vehicle headed towards the palatial white bungalow. When the vehicle reached the parking space two servants came running towards the car. The doors were opened for them. Both of them got down from the car and headed towards house. “Keep the luggage in my room” he ordered them.
Entering the colossal living room, he saw his father watching something on the television. Heading towards his change room, he asked for something to eat and drink. He was very hungry. He entered his dress change room and removed his blazer. The temperature here is getting worse year by year, he thought. Switching on the a/c he untied the tie, unbuttoned the shirt and unhooked the belt. He entered the adjacent bathroom, had a shower and came out in a silky towel. Drops of water were still on his body. There she was waiting for him. “The food is ready”. He went near to her and held her close. “You are wet.” She removed his towel and tried to dry his body. “I will make you too wet, don’t you want?” he giggled. Blushing, she threw the towel on him and headed towards the door. “Come dressed up, I will be waiting for you near the table, your food is ready”, she smiled coyly. He opened the cupboard, got a night dress out from many. This one was the one he had picked up from
The table was full of dishes. Right from his favourite chicken items to fish items and even mutton. The vegetarian dishes also were there but he didn’t check which all were there. A bottled of chilled champagne also was there. His mother came down and sat besides him. He planted a kiss on her cheeks. Her face was gleaming with happiness. After the food he headed back towards the living room. His father was watching some movie in which South Indian superstar Mohanlal was acting his guts out with comedy. Greeting his father he settled in his two lakh worth cushion. “How is the system” he asked. His father gestured with his hands which meant ‘Superb’. He sat there content. Paying seven lakhs for the home theatre system including the plazma television didn’t go waste.
Bidding a good night to his dad he went to his bedroom. He reached near the bed, the one he had specially imported from
“Trrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggg”
He banged the alarm and made it stop crying. Opened his eyes. He didn’t get out from the blanket. Lying down on his back he stared the ceiling. The plaster of the roof had cracks running down in a particular pattern. The old ‘Orient’ fan was doing its job with a buzzing sound as if it was tired running the whole night.
He removed the blanket; sat on the bed. His lips nurtured a smile. He stared the banyan tree which was visible outside his almost dilapidated house through the windows which bore broken glasses. He got up from his bed, which made squeaking voices and was shaking.
“What a wonderful dream” he thought and headed towards bathroom in his boxers.
“Shit”, he fussed. The geyser needs a repair. The water was so chilled which can bring anyone back to full senses.
77 comments:
ahahahahahahah rotfl...thats really funny man....nice job vinu...had lot of laugh now :)..
urs..hemu..
if only wishes were horses...*sigh*
LOL...
Nice..but the climax was a little predictable.. :p
it was almost like-riches 2 rags.
i was so absorbed in the description dat i failed 2 notice the subtle hints u gave dat it was a dream.like-price of each luxury item,etc.
I rejected few of my comments by mistake..Instead of publishing them i clicked the rejection button in hurry...
Am reproducing their comments over here..!!
Arv has left a new comment on your post "Life...":
Dream away mate... Lovely story...
enjoyed it :)
take care mate.. cheers...
Cinderella. has left a new comment on your post "Life...":
:(
I didnt like this one at all Vinz !! Very lack-lustre, predictable - too many elemenst jargoned in an effort to make it interesting...and totally not your style !!!!
I;m sorry but I am so disappointed, infact from the start itself !
:(
And to top it you want us to be frank !!!
sawan has left a new comment on your post "Life...":
nice one again!
Think Tank has left a new comment on your post "Life...":
i don't know whether to laugh or cry ..i mean dreams they are such fragile things...
mayz has left a new comment on your post "Life...":
hahaha!!! poor him...ah well but dreams r d seeds for a better tmrw
dreams.. they are too good only when we sleep..
@hemanth,
yeah, dreams are funny many a times..!!
:)
@siam,
well said friend..!!
:)
@zubin,
yeah, the end was not that effective..
:(
@anwesa,
:)
yeah, only in dreams such luxuries are affordable..!!
@arv,
yeah, what life if not for dreaming..!!
:)
@cinderella,
i was expecting such remarks for this post since even i felt there was no punch to the story..rather i felt its a cliched story..!!
yeah, not my best..!!
and thanks for being frank..!!as i wrote so i meant..!!
:)
@sawan
:)
Do keep visiting..!!
@think tank
dreams are fragile things..indeed..but worth relishing ..!!
:)
@chriz,
true mate..
how i love my sleeps..!!
:)
@mayz,
:)
atleast he enjoyed in his dreams..!!
:)
wELL WRITTEN
:)
POOR GUY...
lol what a voluptuous description! it made me laugh :D
you rock vinz ;)
wowwwwwww...u got me transported to a different world..a world of dreams n fantasies..opulence n grandeur..
its more like a Karan Johar/Yash Raj script tho :)
very well written..
Irony captured beautifully. Loved the contrast of 'glass walls' at the airport with that of 'broken glasses' at his house in the end... Simply superb narration..
Lol!!
HILARIOUS
PS_come collect yr awrd!
it was a really nice dream! really :)
C.
Your dream?!! :p Pretty good one!! You have a very nice imagination!! Keep writing!!
nice attempt. but this kind of stories hv nothing new. try some new ideas... innovate sumthing.
take care
@riversoul,
:)
yeah poor guy..!!
@divz,
:)
@swats,
i think most of 'us' love travelling on such kinda dreams..!!
:)
@oxy,
i thought i couldnt capture that irony in the way i wanted..!!
:)
@crystal,
thnx..
@cess,
wish such things come true..
;)
@thoorika,
thanks for dropping by..
do keep visiting also..!!
:)
@preetilata,
yeah, i understand..
even i was not satisfied totally...
:(
Hahaha...If it were me - I would go back to sleep :)
Nice one :)
bwuahhh :) the cotton candy dreams--> wish life took a lesson from dreams!
heee..
goo done there vinu :)
:)
Dreams...If they came true......
Hmmm nice but it was a little predictable..Anyways my first time here, will be back :)
Lovely.....never expected such a twist... though I usually guess where there's gonna be one :)
@ceedy,
thats the very reason i get to office late almost all day..!!
:)
@jane,
;)
if not for dreams what is life for..??
@andrew,
thnks for dropping by..!!
@kiran,
yeah, if...!!
@trooper,
thanks for dropping by...
come back again..!!
:)
@meghna,
:)
actually i thought the twist very much predictable..!!
:)
do visit again...!!
Collect yr award,man!
agaiiin!! u got to get some praise man ha ha this' again a twist at the end lol
niice job
predictable mate...
u did say a lot about the value of things and that didn't go well ..
take care
lol!
oyeee puja pics are there at
http://phoenix-snapshots.blogspot.com/
pura post para karo yaar....end para mein likha tha pics kahan hai :P :)
dekh kay batana kaisa tha ok?
Vinooo...I should admit that the ending was a little predictable for me, especially when you kept mentioning about his luxuries. But seriously, awesome narration man. Keeps a reader glued.
Btw, why do you keep comment moderation? It avoids a lot of work, na?
life can be a dream...just keep dreaming :)
Keshi.
ROFL....lovely one!!
@crystal,
done..!!
@Priya joyce
thanks
:)
@vicky,
yeah, i realize..!!
:)
@phoenix,
will be over ther..!!
:)
@vimal,
Thanks dude...!!
the moderation was kept earlier because i used to get a lot of spams due to my inactivity...
:)
@keshi,
always dreaming..!!
:)
@priya,
:)
lol..fst I thot u were writing another karan johar's flick of an ordinary indian desi guy... :P
but the dream angle was well inserted....
u cud had increased the durations of the steamy scenes after the showers..u kno it cud had increased the trps more :P:P
loved the dream and agree with the reality,...my fan is Usha and she cries a lot too :P
kya sapnaa hai dost ... I was literally going from one room to the another with your story .... itne saarein room ki main thak gaya :)
nice one !!!
and the collage idea is innovative and coool ... liked it !!!
ha ha nice .. and from the description looks like u have dreams of your own as well
din expect the twist till it came .. so well written
Lol..
@daydreamer,
yeah, i was planning..but couldnt come up with that properly..
:)
Usha fan rocks.. ;)
@hiren,
:)
dreams are always luxurious..!!
:)
@Descrying
:)
who will not have dreams buddy...
:)
@archana,
thanks for dropping by..
do keep visiting..!!
:)
awww.. but then.. its important to dream.. for only when you dream.. it comes true! :D
Good things always have to be a dream .. never understood that logic ..
But ya .. compensations are received when you see yourself lying on the roadside too ..
Life .. evens it out !
hey...u write really well...ya the climax was predictable..but..u got the makings of a goood writer...will blogroll u... :-)
@bhai with chai,
exactly..
:)
@vinod,
but the best thing is that atleast they stay good as we want ...!!
and there is no limit..!!!
:)
@mads,
thnaks friend..thanks for dropping by..!!
:)
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