Thursday, September 11

Unwanted Monthly Guest...



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HER Part
She looked at her tummy. Though not in perfect shape, there were no traces of extra fat. She felt it with her hands. She could feel an inward pull. The pain was unbearable. She could feel an eruption of volcano inside. She felt a 1000 kilogram weights were hanging around her chest. She wished to unload those assets at least for a split second to relieve her of her agony. She heard him remove his shoes and climb up that wooden staircase. A gentle hug, a peck on her nape, caressing her curvy bosoms from sides, she knew what was going to follow step by step. As expected, not even with a slight change in the routine, he came close by, caressed her hips, nibbled her ears and moved slowly towards his favourite place. But today she was not enjoying what she yearns the other twenty five days of a month.
She could feel the dryness between her legs, as a premonition of a flood that is to be affected. How she abhors the extra piece of cloth she need to place between her legs. She felt like kicking his groin since he should also know how it feels when there is a burning in between the thighs. She tried to escape from his cage of hug.
HIS Part
The day in office was pretty hectic and he wanted to share his joys and sorrows with her. He wanted to feel her presence, her caring words and the warmth of her body.
She was standing in the foyer facing those black curtains covering half of the windows. The silky nightwear she was wearing was his favourite. Without making any sound, with the rose he bought from the vendor boy in the traffic signal in one hand, he hugged her from behind. He wanted her to turn around and reciprocate with a warm hug. Some expectations are better if not thought off. A peck on her neck was not the best he had given. But still he knew how she loved his warm lips wandering aimlessly over there. His hands rounded her belly and he clutched the rose between his hands and her navel. He wondered why she was standing there aloof. When he thought of caressing more enough to make her happy, she shivered a bit and tried to bust his embrace.
THEIR Part
“You don’t have any other thing to do or what. All you want is to satisfy your carnal desires” She roared. Her gruff voice cracked and eyes were spitting fire.
He stood there flummoxed. He didn’t want her to get upset. All he wanted was the warmth of hers. A hug would have done that. But he knows she too enjoyed him caressing her flesh. She can be a dormant soul only when she is facing the biological invasion that is only designed for womanhood.
But he empathised with her. The pain, the emotions, the irritations she was going through can never be felt. A woman after all, suffers these things whole through her green years. Only the wearer knows where the shoe pinches. He wanted to be with her, through her feelings, through her irritations and through her pains.
He went to their bedroom. There she was standing in front of the window. She was staring into the infinity. He stood behind her. After a second thought he called her by name, the one which is very exclusive for them, and the one which he calls her when they both are left only for each other. He could hear her sigh, but was standstill. He just stood closely, again placed his hands around her, gently. “It is unbearable or what?” He whispered.
“Yeah, it is early this month. And it’s blowing a hole in me.”
“No problem, we will share the pain together” He just stood there hugging her. She could feel the warmth of his body. Ironically, that was soothing the warmth inside hers. She turned back; looked into his eyes. She could sense his despair that he was not able to offer any help other than an emotional crutch. They stood hugging each other with their eyes closed.
“Just be with me”, she fondled his lush lips with hers.
He could feel the weak beats of her ticker.

55 comments:

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

That was so beautiful!

You have put across such a delicate issue so well.True,some guys are very caring.

Me Mini Mini Mouse said...

Oh My GAWD
Oh My GAWD
Oh My GAWD

WOW... r u serious... r u really a man? u sure u not a woman? I mean, how do you do this... plz put up ur pic for me to confirm...LOL

This is simply awesome... u just express it so beautifully Vinu

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@sameera,

yeah..many of them are..
:)

i was not sure about the narration of the post..i was doubtful whether i can be able to portray the pain involved in the plot..!!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@divkiran

yeah, i am sure.. :)
there is nothing special in this, i mean, its something we all also do feel...though wont experience first hand...

i just tried to portrayed both sides..good to see that you appreciated it..!!

:)

Cess said...

wow that s pretty awesome, also pretty hard to believe u are a dude, cause i haven t met many guys with this attitude, but more like 'shit, i can put it behind my ear for couple of days, great' or just take care of ur stuff it s not a bid deal anyway right!
Very talented writer I have to say ;)

Pavi!!!! said...

Thats pretty empathetic!

Divya said...

:O

err...
:O

you're not a girl??!! wow! i'm surprised guys understand all this :O
delicate issue, handled well!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@cess,

all smiles...ntg more to say..
thnx..i try to write good..happy to know people are enjoying a bit..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@pavi

yeah.. :)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@divya,

yeah we do..we live with woman...we are never detached to them..!!

we very well sense their feelings..


:)

mayz said...

dude u rock man!!!!

Keshi said...

There are only 2 guys in this world who'd u'stand wut PMS is...

1.Vinu
2.God


oii nice write up Vinu! can this be an attempt to woo some girl here @Vinu? ;-)


Keshi.

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@mayz,

thnx man..
great u liked it..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@keshi,

hey keshi, those lines were way above flattering...

and regarding the wooing part..
This one is a special dedication for someone.. Out from this blog world..!

:)

HOBO said...

Sharing is Caring...
:)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

:) well, brothers, fathers and boyfriends--> it's really touching when they understand why their dahling has gone beserk :)

loved the way it has been so sensitively handled :)

ANWESA said...

well,i can only say u cud b a miraculous healer..

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@hobo,

very true mate..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@jane,

thnk u for ur comments..agreeing with u..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@anwesa,

thnx for your words..!!

:)

phoenix said...

wow...i so liked this post...you know not many guys[boy friends/husbands] realize the wealth of pain a girl goes through....and is more often than not they are insensitive and don't understand that the woman is having a hard time in like.... i like the male protagonist....:)

D said...

Whoever is responsible for all the PMS-ing in the world, I can't hate you enough!

But really, that was quite a post coming from a guy!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@phoenix,

great your liked it..!!
the 'wealth' of pain...i liked the phrase..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@D

the comment for this post is valuable. thnx friend..

:)

Cess said...

u ve been rewarded
cheers

C.

Priya Joyce said...

This is a very emotional post emotional because it shows the closeness love brings it shows how we even can share the pain as such when we love someone. it was really a touching experience for me to know that there are guys who care this much.
nice post never thought a male could write that.

lukkydivz said...

its intriguing how men feel the pain of a woman ;) great write-up vinu :)

Chriz said...

i am planning to get married soon

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@cess,

thnx friend..
am i worth it..??

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@priya,

now this is a common comment i recieved throughout this post...

we guys also do feel..but its only that most of them dont express.. now, dont ask me why..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@divz,

thnx frnd..i am seeing most of the woman bloggers are commenting positive abt this...few guys too..

this was a topic i wanted to write for so long..!!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

chriz,

man, you are gonna face this pain more often, more close..!!
congrats!!
be caring and sharing..!!

:)

Hemanth Potluri said...

dude u have done a gr8 job...its just awesome piece...it was soo emotional..i read it 5 times and more effect it has ...wonderful piece man..:)..


urs..hemu..

Prashant Sree said...

Hey Man,

Thats was a lovely post... A nice way of meaning what true love and affection is...

Gr8 post.,.

Keep Sharing !!

Cheers.

Prashant
*+

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Hemant,

thnx buddy...five times..ooooh..am flattered big time..!!

yeah the whole thing is too emtional..

:)

vamsi parimi said...

A Different Beat:

Nice.

A reality Check: She is past her PMS for christ sake. (LOL)

For women who think why men dont get it or why he isn't the way she want to be around those days...FIGURE OUT

Men are different(I'm not going to start crap on superiority or so).

Men doesn't get it. Its awesome if he tries to understand. And as years of co-inhabitation pass on, he realizes the true woman. But he never GETS it(even if he is knocked between his thighs).

(Only a true experience can understand the emotion involved..)

The essentiality of a CREATION:
DIFFERENCE
(Dont go over board again..I am not talking one's perception of difference here)

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PARIMI

nefariousoutlook said...

good post man!!! thinking on both sides..not many people can do that so well :)...keep posting :)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@prashant,

thanx man for your visit and valuable comments. Happy to get appreciated..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@param

~~For women who think why men dont get it or why he isn't the way she want to be around those days...FIGURE OUT~~

I dont think that can be ever figured out..!!

~~Men doesn't get it. Its awesome if he tries to understand. And as years of co-inhabitation pass on, he realizes the true woman. But he never GETS it(even if he is knocked between his thighs).~~

:)

~~(Only a true experience can understand the emotion involved..)~~

maybe...am not experienced as married men..truly said

~~The essentiality of a CREATION:
DIFFERENCE~~

thought provoking..!!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

good post man!!! thinking on both sides..not many people can do that so well :)...keep posting :)

@ thnx yaar...we always look from both sides, thats what i believe..!!
it helps to go smooth in life..!!

thnx for ur comments.

:)

Solitaire said...

Hum Tum with a topic not touched before, I guess.

Cess said...

u re damn worth it dude ;)
keep me smiling with ur posts ;)

C.

gunj said...

just perfect:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@solitaire,

yeah, untouched topic, generally..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@cess,

oh yeah, sure i will try..
i love keeping others smile..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@cess,

oh yeah, sure i will try..
i love keeping others smile..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@gunj,

thnx mate..!!

:)

roop said...

this was soooo wonderful!!! :))) could see my husband in the story ... cuz this episode happened just this month lol exactly the same. :p

fabulously done. thank u

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@roop,

great to hear you enjoyed this..most of the girls said about the pain..nobody could believe there are men who take care this way...great you could find your husband in this piece of writing...

:)

moi said...

hey i jst happnd to read ur blog, this is marvellous peice of work u hav wrote, beautifully expressed the emotions...gr8 job! its very rare to find men who care so much....

Reeta said...

hi vinu

U put such a delicate and sensitive issue across so well... There's a magic in ur writing!!

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Anonymous said...

Aha, so too it seemed to me.