Monday, March 15

Twinkle...


“These days your number of calls had reduced” She said in a grinned voice while resting her head on his chest. She tightened her grip around him. A deep sigh followed.

He was still reading the messages unread from his blackberry.

“You don’t even keep my messages in your mobile. Earlier you used to keep all my lovey-dovey messages send by me. Nowadays since I am always available with you, you don’t even recognize my existence.”

He kept the mobile aside. Looked at her and winked. “It doesn’t mean that my love for you has ceased.”

“No, I am not saying that. But earlier I was there always in your words, deeds and everywhere. When we used to be with friends, your eyes followed me. When we used to be on dates, your stares never stopped. But now, after marriage, after so many years..I don’t feel it”

He smiled, his natural smile.

“So you think you are not there in my thoughts and words?”

“mmm…Yeah, atleast I cant see it or feel it. Oh! Am so sad..” She clutched him tightly.

He took her face and stared straight onto her eyes.

“Cant you see the twinkle in my eyes, sweet? “

“mmmm…” lazily she answered. She always loved his eyes.

“That’s you honey; the twinkle.”

The world seemed brighter for her. A gentle smile, a tight hug, Life is a bliss..!!

46 comments:

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

And dil garden garden ho gaya...

Shefs said...

:)
simply loved it..
i love the twinkle part..
:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Life is a real bliss..no doubt..:) well written..:)

ANWESA said...

Mushy mushy !

Beauty and the BEast said...

awwww.... absolutely romantic!!

Arv said...

Touche :)

rainboy said...

lovely ;D

I am smiling after reading this...
thank you

take care

Hemanth Potluri said...

romantic :D....

urs..hemu..

Smita said...

awww!!! this is a lovely story :) and seriously mostly it is the smallest action or gesture which gives us immense happiness!!

alphabetworld said...

the 'twinkle' was such a romantic touch!

Dhanya said...

Loved it! :) The perfect love story for anyone after marriage...

Vee said...

I exactly know what is happening in your story as I am going through the same; happens once you are in relationship.

Zubin said...

Romance is in the air..eh..? :p

commited to life said...

awwww...
so beautiful...

it made me smile a big smile...

p.s blogrolling u

Vinz said...

@hobo.

:) Haanji..!!

Vinz said...

@shefs,

i know..!!

;)

Vinz said...

@pramoda,

indeed...
:)

Thanks..

Vinz said...

@anwesha,

:)

Vinz said...

@Beast And Beauty,

Yup..absolutely..

Vinz said...

@arv,

:)

Vinz said...

@rain boy,

happy to make u smile..
thnx...

:)

Vinz said...

@hemu,

yup, completely..
;)

Vinz said...

@smita,

korrect madam...
thats all about our life..

:)

Vinz said...

@alphabetworld,

thank u friend..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@dhanya,

not exactly..!!before marraige too..


:)

Vinz said...

@vee,

u know it better, these days...
;)

Vinz said...

@zubin,

kinda..
;)

Vinz said...

@commited to life,

great to know i cud generate a smile in u..
do keep visiting..!!

:)

Pooja said...

awwww!!!

so so beautiful..loved it!

Oru said...

nicee...really.. not just after marriage..its exactly like this for a couple who've been in a relation for quite some time.. n women..bless them..always too happy with the little things that their sweethearts can provide..
thanks.. :)

Vinz said...

@pooja,

:)

Thanxz...

Vinz said...

Arundhati,

Yeah, completely agreed..!!
:)

As i said in one of my reply, it applies to everyone in a relationship...

:)

moi said...

indeed its a bliss with those twinkles!!

Imagination said...
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Vinz said...

Moi, I know...

:)

WarmSunshine said...

haaayeee Allah... what a romantic shomantic tale :P

brought a smile :)
thanks for dropping by :)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Sweet! :)

Vinz said...

@mehreen,

Thnx..

:)

Vinz said...

@ Chandrika,

Thnx a lot for dropping by..
Do visit whenever possible..!!

:)

my inner world said...

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!... i know hubbys dont show... but they do love the wifeys... its just most of them arent that demonstrative.....!!!!!!!

Vinz said...

@innerworld,

I know..
:)

Pri said...

i guess guys will never understand the fact that girls know yet want to be told :)

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

So so so so very beautiful! :')

Vinz said...

@priya,

eggjaactly..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@Pri,

Guys understands...
:)

Trust me..!!

:)

Nikita said...

ooooooooohhhhhhhhhh.....
Dats such a lovely post....I am in love wid d couple...nd wid d blog too..