“The chemistry between us was still there. We were meeting at college after fifteen years. Both of us now married with two adorable kids, could feel the mercury rising. Those days, mills and boon, long walks, hours long mobile chatting, canteen flirting, college garden lawn, hugs and kisses days..!!”
I still love her, my wife…
PS : A try at 55-Fiction using prompt from One-Word Prompt web page. Pardon Me!!
I still love her, my wife…
PS : A try at 55-Fiction using prompt from One-Word Prompt web page. Pardon Me!!
49 comments:
Love stays forever if happen.
awesome for the first attempt Vinz...
Great attempt! Keep it up...
Love it!!!
beautiful for first attempt :)... keep it up:)..
i loved it:)
tat ws reely sweet :):)
wow.. so sweet...
visit my page too ! :)
55 Fiction is a difficult genre of fiction..It requires one to be creative and precise at the same time..
Cool!
PS: Loved the pic :)
nice sweet one!!!
My novel reader mind was thinking of some twist ;)
beautiful without being unnecessarily mushy!
nice.....liked content...lol....is that ur real pic btw
Thats just awesome bro :)...55 words u have done the magic :)..
urs...hemu..
Good one bro !!! :D :D :D
congratulations!! first love is always magical..
Awesome attempt..keep them coming!!
I love reading 55's! Expecting more from you :)
Niceness...
:) ...Soo touching :)
:) ...Soo touching :)
woweeee... so very well written :D!nice to be here..blogrolling yu...tk care
HaRy
good one bro!
Nice one
hey ty Vinu Im doing fine :) Hope all is well with u too?
TC n KIT
Keshi.
so very sweet , really it is very touchy ,may u people remain like this forever.
if this is ur first attemtempt! i am wowed :O
Hobo,
not always..
:)
@neha,
thank u neha..
:)
@mariposa,
thank u ma'm...
:)
@tulip,
thnx friend..!!
:)
@priya,
yeah..
:)
@pinkz..
thnx
sure..
:)
@swats,
yeah, i know..just 55 words to express everything..
:)
@smita,
:)
even i wanted a twist..but then 55 words..!!phew..
:)
@tinkerbell
:)
@ryn,
naah..not mine..
thanks to internet...
:)
@hemu,
:) thanx..
yeah, kinda tried to..
:)
@vimmu,
thnx man...
@shradha..
not only the first one..
all..
;)
@toon
thank u..keep visiting..!!
:)
@thoorika,
thank u..
keep visiting..!!
:)
@vee,
thankuness..!!
@being pramoda,
thank u..
:)
@hary,
thank u hary..
keep visiting..
:)
@sawan,
thank u bro..!!
:)
@jeeves,
Thank U...
:)
@keshi,
thank u..
long time..
great to see u back..
:)
@sonali,
thank u for visiting..
its a fiction piece...
:)
@AD,
oh, then i am blushing..
:)
thank u..!!
hey vinz.....nice attempt...
@aks,
thnx ya..!!
:)
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