Tuesday, September 22

Mercury...

“The chemistry between us was still there. We were meeting at college after fifteen years. Both of us now married with two adorable kids, could feel the mercury rising. Those days, mills and boon, long walks, hours long mobile chatting, canteen flirting, college garden lawn, hugs and kisses days..!!”




I still love her, my wife…



PS : A try at 55-Fiction using prompt from One-Word Prompt web page. Pardon Me!!

49 comments:

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Love stays forever if happen.

Neha said...

awesome for the first attempt Vinz...

Mariposa said...

Great attempt! Keep it up...

Love it!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

beautiful for first attempt :)... keep it up:)..

i loved it:)

Priya Joyce said...

tat ws reely sweet :):)

pinkZz said...

wow.. so sweet...
visit my page too ! :)

Swats said...

55 Fiction is a difficult genre of fiction..It requires one to be creative and precise at the same time..

Cool!

PS: Loved the pic :)

Smita said...

nice sweet one!!!

My novel reader mind was thinking of some twist ;)

tinkerbell said...

beautiful without being unnecessarily mushy!

$.RYN.$ said...

nice.....liked content...lol....is that ur real pic btw

Hemanth Potluri said...

Thats just awesome bro :)...55 words u have done the magic :)..

urs...hemu..

vimmuuu said...

Good one bro !!! :D :D :D

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

congratulations!! first love is always magical..

Toon India said...

Awesome attempt..keep them coming!!

Thoorika said...

I love reading 55's! Expecting more from you :)

Vee said...

Niceness...

Being Pramoda... said...

:) ...Soo touching :)

Being Pramoda... said...

:) ...Soo touching :)

HaRy!! said...

woweeee... so very well written :D!nice to be here..blogrolling yu...tk care

HaRy

sawan said...

good one bro!

Jeeves said...

Nice one

Keshi said...

hey ty Vinu Im doing fine :) Hope all is well with u too?

TC n KIT
Keshi.

Sonali said...

so very sweet , really it is very touchy ,may u people remain like this forever.

Americanising Desi said...

if this is ur first attemtempt! i am wowed :O

Vinz said...

Hobo,

not always..
:)

Vinz said...

@neha,

thank u neha..
:)

Vinz said...

@mariposa,

thank u ma'm...

:)

Vinz said...

@tulip,

thnx friend..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@priya,

yeah..
:)

Vinz said...

@pinkz..

thnx
sure..

:)

Vinz said...

@swats,

yeah, i know..just 55 words to express everything..

:)

Vinz said...

@smita,

:)

even i wanted a twist..but then 55 words..!!phew..

:)

Vinz said...

@tinkerbell

:)

Vinz said...

@ryn,

naah..not mine..
thanks to internet...

:)

Vinz said...

@hemu,

:) thanx..
yeah, kinda tried to..
:)

Vinz said...

@vimmu,

thnx man...

Vinz said...

@shradha..

not only the first one..
all..

;)

Vinz said...

@toon

thank u..keep visiting..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@thoorika,

thank u..
keep visiting..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@vee,

thankuness..!!

Vinz said...

@being pramoda,

thank u..
:)

Vinz said...

@hary,

thank u hary..
keep visiting..

:)

Vinz said...

@sawan,

thank u bro..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@jeeves,

Thank U...

:)

Vinz said...

@keshi,

thank u..
long time..
great to see u back..

:)

Vinz said...

@sonali,

thank u for visiting..
its a fiction piece...

:)

Vinz said...

@AD,

oh, then i am blushing..
:)

thank u..!!

aks said...

hey vinz.....nice attempt...

Vinz said...

@aks,

thnx ya..!!

:)