Saturday, October 3

I Do...


And do you take this woman to be your lawful wedded wife, to love, honor and cherish, in good and bad time, for richer or poorer, in sickness and health, until death do you part?”

He smiled at the pastor, his woman and thought, whole life?

He sighed and said “Do I, Yeah I do?”



PS: Another try at 55 fiction writing...Inspired from another story...

38 comments:

pinkZz said...

hey.. very well written :)

Thoorika said...

Inspired from another story?? LOL .. hilarious!!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

:)...nice...

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Intelligent say Yes.

avdi said...

Mean man ! But seriously, such thoughts do tend to pop into your head.

Hemanth Potluri said...

that nice bro :)...

urs..hemu..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Vinz,

short and good..:) A very deep message abt the marriage..:)

joie de vivre said...

story hai ya sms ;)

Neha said...

hmmm, good attempt...i bet he would have said yes only...everyone does...n after marriage, they all regret ;)

vimmuuu said...

LOL !!! he sighed, huh? the beginning of a happy married life !! :D :D :D

Vinz said...

@pinkz,

thanks friend..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@tulip,

thank u..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@hobo,

i think u meant to say its intelligent to say YES..!!

;)

Vinz said...

@avdi,

i know..but such things do happen..

:)

Vinz said...

@hemu,

:)

Vinz said...

@pramoda,

yeah, i know..deep and scary maybe..

:)

Vinz said...

@joy

story tha...smsm ke format mein..
:)

55 fiction it is called..or rather i tried for that format..

:)

Vinz said...

@neha...

i know..
many of them..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@vimmu..

yeah, he sighed..!!
And thats a beginning..

;)

Vinz said...

@thoorika,

:)

yeah, the matter, i meant

;)

Vee said...

R u gonna restrict urself to this 55 thingy aa?

Guria said...

Hey, nice 55! Just chanced upon! :)

Smita said...

For a second I thought this wans't fiction :D

Nice one :)

Beauty and the BEast said...

I would hate to be in the girl's shoes... wait.. I would hate to be in the guy's even more!!!

lena said...

why did he have to sigh? reluctant??

kasabiangirl said...

Nice post...very sweet :)

aks said...

sigh n say 'I DO'....guess everyone does...the sigh is just a honest expression of feelings...poor men we are...

nicely written

Gagan said...

3 lines of high passion and drama....and it took just 1 line to make the new bride to doubt his man! :P
Love it! :)

moi said...

funny and a good attempt :)

Vinz said...

@vee,

nai re..abhi to this is comfortable thts all....time nahi milra..

;)

Vinz said...

@guria,

thanx for dropping by..do keep visiting..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@smita,

:)
this is..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@beauty and the beast,

any girl would hate it i guess...
and yeah, no guy will prefer this way..

;)

Vinz said...

@lena,

maybe...or maybe not too sure..

:)

Vinz said...

@kasbian girl,

thnx a lot..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@aks,

yeah...i dont know abt most of them..but yeah few of them atleast..

:)

Vinz said...

@gagan,

thnx man..!!

:)

Vinz said...

@moi,

thank u dear...!!

:)