Sunday, July 24

Stress...





Give me that stare now
Your eyebrows raised and shaped
Wide smile on your lips

Those dimples round and deep
Your cheeks rosy; and innocent
Sparkles in your eyes

Just hug me forever
So that i feel real bliss
All my stress vanished



Form of Poetry : Haiku / Senryu

11 comments:

beccagivens said...

Nicely done!

Bluebell Books said...

unbeatable.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Beautiful longing in these haikus!

Ramesh Sood said...

May your stress vanish!! God bless..

Ramesh Sood said...

May your stress vanish!! God bless..

Ramesh Sood said...

May your stress vanish!! God bless..

meethimirchi said...

beautiful , melodic & calming,

Leo said...

With such a hug, I doubt melancholy and stress will ever reach you! :)

Someone is Special said...

beautiful...

Someone is Special

~Serendipity~ said...

Just hug me forever
So that i feel real bliss
All my stress vanished

Do I adore you already ?

Aakriti said...

Haloo...dropping by from Pentagram's blog..I liked this poem of haiku...and yeah I started writing them too..they are so much fun.

Can I give a suggestion pls? ur words are beautiful, if only u cud make the background not transparent. Its tough reading words. Just find urself a nuce dark background, and u're good!:)
Good day!