Give me that stare now
Your eyebrows raised and shaped
Wide smile on your lips
Those dimples round and deep
Your cheeks rosy; and innocent
Sparkles in your eyes
Just hug me forever
So that i feel real bliss
All my stress vanished
Form of Poetry : Haiku / Senryu
11 comments:
Nicely done!
unbeatable.
Beautiful longing in these haikus!
May your stress vanish!! God bless..
May your stress vanish!! God bless..
May your stress vanish!! God bless..
beautiful , melodic & calming,
With such a hug, I doubt melancholy and stress will ever reach you! :)
beautiful...
Someone is Special
Just hug me forever
So that i feel real bliss
All my stress vanished
Do I adore you already ?
Haloo...dropping by from Pentagram's blog..I liked this poem of haiku...and yeah I started writing them too..they are so much fun.
Can I give a suggestion pls? ur words are beautiful, if only u cud make the background not transparent. Its tough reading words. Just find urself a nuce dark background, and u're good!:)
Good day!
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