Thursday, July 30

Is It The Spring Or You ?


There are four seasons in a year
For me they are all the same…

Being with you is like spring time
Where everything is fresh and clear…

The colorful butterflies fluttering,
Reminds me of colors you brought in my life…

The freshness in the air,
Reminds me of your face…

The smell of the soil,
Reminds me of your breath…

The brush of the wind
Reminds me of your touch…

The chirping sound of birds
Reminds me of your voice…

At last, you keep me thinking

Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?


So beautiful… So worthwhile….

24 comments:

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

it made me go 'awweeeeeeeeeee' lovely lines there..and a beautiful comparison..

Cheers
Kajal

Arv said...

dude... this rocks...

I love the last lines...

love and care makes one enjoy the nature better :)

take care dude :)

Vee said...

Bravo!!!

vimmuuu said...

Love, love and only love !!!

Keshi said...

And this one is so beautiful Vinu! I loved it :)

Some ppl r like Spring...they bring life to our lives.

Keshi.

Phoenix said...

last two lines were brilliant!! :)

Devika said...

For me, who is often referred to as cold winter, reading this is a pleasure Vinu :)

you will make for a good lover....writing and singing love poems is the way :)

wishes,
devika

moi said...

beautiful poem vinu!! :)

Thoorika said...

Mamla kya hai ?! Cute dedications.. sweet poems.. ! ;) :D Nice one!!

Pooja said...

**Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?

awww!! so cute!!

Pooja said...

**Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?

awww!! so cute!!

Suree said...

lovely lines

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Orchid,

Thank You Girl..

:)

Vinz

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Arv,

Yeah. Very true..
Both go well together..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Vee,

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Vimal,

yeah, thats life..
or rather, i prefer that way..

;)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Keshi,

exactly...

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Phoenix,

thanks friend..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Devika,

you always flatter me..
:)

dont know whether i can be a good lover.. but yeah, if writing this way moulds one, i am on my way..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

moi,

thank u friend...

Vinz aka Vinu said...

thoorika,

:)

ntg special..just felt like writing..when thought about someone..

;)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

pooja,

thanks..
:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Suree,

thanks yaar..

AbbY said...

This is good one.. I like it.