There are four seasons in a year
For me they are all the same…
Being with you is like spring time
Where everything is fresh and clear…
The colorful butterflies fluttering,
Reminds me of colors you brought in my life…
The freshness in the air,
Reminds me of your face…
The smell of the soil,
Reminds me of your breath…
The brush of the wind
Reminds me of your touch…
The chirping sound of birds
Reminds me of your voice…
At last, you keep me thinking
Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?
So beautiful… So worthwhile….
24 comments:
it made me go 'awweeeeeeeeeee' lovely lines there..and a beautiful comparison..
Cheers
Kajal
dude... this rocks...
I love the last lines...
love and care makes one enjoy the nature better :)
take care dude :)
Bravo!!!
Love, love and only love !!!
And this one is so beautiful Vinu! I loved it :)
Some ppl r like Spring...they bring life to our lives.
Keshi.
last two lines were brilliant!! :)
For me, who is often referred to as cold winter, reading this is a pleasure Vinu :)
you will make for a good lover....writing and singing love poems is the way :)
wishes,
devika
beautiful poem vinu!! :)
Mamla kya hai ?! Cute dedications.. sweet poems.. ! ;) :D Nice one!!
**Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?
awww!! so cute!!
**Is it the spring that reminds me of you
Or
Is it you who made my life like a spring?
awww!! so cute!!
lovely lines
Orchid,
Thank You Girl..
:)
Vinz
Arv,
Yeah. Very true..
Both go well together..!!
:)
Vee,
:)
Vimal,
yeah, thats life..
or rather, i prefer that way..
;)
Keshi,
exactly...
:)
Phoenix,
thanks friend..
:)
Devika,
you always flatter me..
:)
dont know whether i can be a good lover.. but yeah, if writing this way moulds one, i am on my way..
:)
moi,
thank u friend...
thoorika,
:)
ntg special..just felt like writing..when thought about someone..
;)
pooja,
thanks..
:)
Suree,
thanks yaar..
This is good one.. I like it.
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