Tuesday, July 21

Let Me Be The One...


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Not once not twice,
I call your name a thousand times
Hoping secretly you will hear it atleast once…

Is it something people say to be aware of
I mean is this what people say is love…

Your smile moves my heart,
Its got the innocence of a child

And your eyes got the hunger for me…

Behind those beautiful eyes lies deep grief..
I can see it though you never say a word

Come, let me be the one to hold you tight..
Give me your sorrows and I will shu them away…
Your dreamy eyes are meant to love
Remember I Am always there for you…

22 comments:

Swats said...

WOW! Who are u dedicating this to? :)

Welcome Back!

Devika said...

Oh! that was fabulous, Vinu :)

"shu them away" -- sounds good :))

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

By the way, where do you vanish in between??

be around, okay?? :)

devika

Devika said...

By the way, where do you vanish in between??

be around, okay?? :)

devika

Arv said...

yours words still has that magic bro...

whos the lucky woman? :)

take care mate...

cheers...

Vee said...

So that's what you were doing when in hiding? Writing this beautiful one....:)

Well, if someone had said those lines to me I would have ran to the person....

pinkZz said...

wow..
i loved it.
how truly love is expressed..
the one you wrote it for is very lucky..
n yeah thanks for your valuable commnt..
keep visiting.!

Smita said...

Awww!!!

This is so heart melting!!!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@swats,

thnx ya.. No one specific...
:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@devika,

thnx devika..
was here only..silent reader..
will be around for sure...
hope u r doing fine..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@arv,

thnx bro..
bt never in comparison wit ur poems..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@vee,

:)
great to see u again over here...
hop everythg is fine wit ya..

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@pinkz,

gud to know u liked it..!!

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@smita,

:)
Thank U...!!

vimmuuu said...

Buddy Vinu, that was beautiful. but please be regular. I miss those jatka stories of yours !

Thoorika said...

Give me your sorrows and I will shu them away

So sorry! but till that line I was enjoying this emotional sweet poem! tat oly line changed the whole scenario!!! "Shu" doesn't really fit here !!! :D

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Vimal,

oh yeah...will be regular..
even i want to do tht..
anyways , no excuses anymore...

c u soon..

:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Thoorika,

Thnx for ur comments...
i know that was a bit informal write up...jus penned like that..nt much thghts went to that..

keep visiting...

:)

Keshi said...

beautiful sentiments Vinu!

Keshi.

Vinz aka Vinu said...

@keshi,

yeah, thank u keshi..

Vinu

Bindhu Unny said...

Oh so touching! :-)

moi said...

woooof lovely!!