Not once not twice,
I call your name a thousand times
Hoping secretly you will hear it atleast once…
Is it something people say to be aware of
I mean is this what people say is love…
Your smile moves my heart,
Its got the innocence of a child
And your eyes got the hunger for me…
Behind those beautiful eyes lies deep grief..
I can see it though you never say a word
Come, let me be the one to hold you tight..
Give me your sorrows and I will shu them away…
Your dreamy eyes are meant to love
Remember I Am always there for you…
22 comments:
WOW! Who are u dedicating this to? :)
Welcome Back!
Oh! that was fabulous, Vinu :)
"shu them away" -- sounds good :))
wishes,
devika
By the way, where do you vanish in between??
be around, okay?? :)
devika
By the way, where do you vanish in between??
be around, okay?? :)
devika
yours words still has that magic bro...
whos the lucky woman? :)
take care mate...
cheers...
So that's what you were doing when in hiding? Writing this beautiful one....:)
Well, if someone had said those lines to me I would have ran to the person....
wow..
i loved it.
how truly love is expressed..
the one you wrote it for is very lucky..
n yeah thanks for your valuable commnt..
keep visiting.!
Awww!!!
This is so heart melting!!!
@swats,
thnx ya.. No one specific...
:)
@devika,
thnx devika..
was here only..silent reader..
will be around for sure...
hope u r doing fine..
:)
@arv,
thnx bro..
bt never in comparison wit ur poems..!!
:)
@vee,
:)
great to see u again over here...
hop everythg is fine wit ya..
@pinkz,
gud to know u liked it..!!
:)
@smita,
:)
Thank U...!!
Buddy Vinu, that was beautiful. but please be regular. I miss those jatka stories of yours !
Give me your sorrows and I will shu them away
So sorry! but till that line I was enjoying this emotional sweet poem! tat oly line changed the whole scenario!!! "Shu" doesn't really fit here !!! :D
Vimal,
oh yeah...will be regular..
even i want to do tht..
anyways , no excuses anymore...
c u soon..
:)
Thoorika,
Thnx for ur comments...
i know that was a bit informal write up...jus penned like that..nt much thghts went to that..
keep visiting...
:)
beautiful sentiments Vinu!
Keshi.
@keshi,
yeah, thank u keshi..
Vinu
Oh so touching! :-)
woooof lovely!!
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