And do you take this woman to be your lawful wedded wife, to love, honor and cherish, in good and bad time, for richer or poorer, in sickness and health, until death do you part?”
He smiled at the pastor, his woman and thought, whole life?
He sighed and said “Do I, Yeah I do?”
PS: Another try at 55 fiction writing...Inspired from another story...
38 comments:
hey.. very well written :)
Inspired from another story?? LOL .. hilarious!!!!
:)...nice...
Intelligent say Yes.
Mean man ! But seriously, such thoughts do tend to pop into your head.
that nice bro :)...
urs..hemu..
Hi Vinz,
short and good..:) A very deep message abt the marriage..:)
story hai ya sms ;)
hmmm, good attempt...i bet he would have said yes only...everyone does...n after marriage, they all regret ;)
LOL !!! he sighed, huh? the beginning of a happy married life !! :D :D :D
@pinkz,
thanks friend..!!
:)
@tulip,
thank u..!!
:)
@hobo,
i think u meant to say its intelligent to say YES..!!
;)
@avdi,
i know..but such things do happen..
:)
@hemu,
:)
@pramoda,
yeah, i know..deep and scary maybe..
:)
@joy
story tha...smsm ke format mein..
:)
55 fiction it is called..or rather i tried for that format..
:)
@neha...
i know..
many of them..!!
:)
@vimmu..
yeah, he sighed..!!
And thats a beginning..
;)
@thoorika,
:)
yeah, the matter, i meant
;)
R u gonna restrict urself to this 55 thingy aa?
Hey, nice 55! Just chanced upon! :)
For a second I thought this wans't fiction :D
Nice one :)
I would hate to be in the girl's shoes... wait.. I would hate to be in the guy's even more!!!
why did he have to sigh? reluctant??
Nice post...very sweet :)
sigh n say 'I DO'....guess everyone does...the sigh is just a honest expression of feelings...poor men we are...
nicely written
3 lines of high passion and drama....and it took just 1 line to make the new bride to doubt his man! :P
Love it! :)
funny and a good attempt :)
@vee,
nai re..abhi to this is comfortable thts all....time nahi milra..
;)
@guria,
thanx for dropping by..do keep visiting..!!
:)
@smita,
:)
this is..!!
:)
@beauty and the beast,
any girl would hate it i guess...
and yeah, no guy will prefer this way..
;)
@lena,
maybe...or maybe not too sure..
:)
@kasbian girl,
thnx a lot..!!
:)
@aks,
yeah...i dont know abt most of them..but yeah few of them atleast..
:)
@gagan,
thnx man..!!
:)
@moi,
thank u dear...!!
:)
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